Pre Production: Script update

I now think I have got my script up to a very good standard. I have sent Simon my second version which I have made some changes in.
The main points that I have focused on while creating this version are:

• The ending wasn't very good; we didn't really see what happened to each of the families in the end so I have now added a Christmas scene which I think sums everything up quite nicely.
• I have also built up Andy and Graham (her step brother) relationship more.
• I have also added in an new character and extra scenes. Anna is Andy's best friend who she walks to and from school with. However Anna gets fed up with listening to all of Andy's drama and finds a new best friend leaving Andy on her own.

I am definatly much more happier with this version and think it is now much nearer completion.