hi maddie - i'm not really back at work yet, but was just checking the blogs out of interest and watched your piece. I know its late in the day - BUT - I strongly suggest you change the music or cut it all together. Because the track has someone singing it really clashes with the poem. There is some great visuals and sound effects, and a good reading - pity to undo that work with a poorly chosen piece of music. you have until 4pm on monday to submit.
hi maddie - i'm not really back at work yet, but was just checking the blogs out of interest and watched your piece. I know its late in the day - BUT - I strongly suggest you change the music or cut it all together. Because the track has someone singing it really clashes with the poem. There is some great visuals and sound effects, and a good reading - pity to undo that work with a poorly chosen piece of music.
ReplyDeleteyou have until 4pm on monday to submit.